Ardhamon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GunShowComic: Skate Butt]

Short, sweet and to the point.

Also really well animated and I absolutely love the style as it really reminds of the animation in Kablaam. Also like the title cards as they looked really well-colored.

The voice acting was pretty good, too.

[Vixen With A Shotgun]

Darker than your usual stuff. I wonder what influenced this.

I like your art, it's cute, cartoony and simplistic. Though your animation might need some work. Now your animation is good here and there. But you might need to work a bit more on the movements like with the arms and heads. I say this because with head movements I noticed the character's head all of a sudden got smaller than it originally was. Consistency is a must. Also, the hands and feet of the humans looked kinda weird at some point. Might need to work on the body. Now anatomy study might not really involve cartooning much but it does help improve the sizes of certain body parts like the hands, fingers, legs, etc. I mean most cartoonists and animators study the anatomy and how it moves before developing their style even further. I should know because I'm practicing my animation and anatomy myself here and there.

As for the plot of the flash, it felt like just random killing and didn't have much of a point to it. Sure, we can kind of interpret the situation here. She's a fox that's basically going after hunters who kill foxes for fur. But I think a bit more can be added to this. More of a story and maybe make it a bit more dramatic. I mean, I like the idea as it's a pretty darn good one. But you might need to try to get some help with more than one person to try and help expand the writing a bit more.

As for the music, it was pretty much suitable and I didn't have any problem with it. But the rock musi c might be only good for the intro but more suspenseful music (minus the singing) can also help set the mood. I mean look at many of the disney films and even animated films from Ralph Bakshi, Brad Bird, Pixar, etc. They all have the appropriate music for the appropriate setting. I mean you could try to use some action music BGM and there are some instrumental songs here on Newgrounds that you could use as well. Sorta like what you did for the Bigger Fish to Fly.

Overall, this was decent to watch. I really liked the darker turn for your stuff. Shows that you have quite a variety in your stuff. Keep it up, dude.

PS:- Hope this was helpful, cuz I might not sound all that helpful but I'm trying.

KFoxyFox responds:

Thats alright, thanks for the input! This short was based on a more drama orientated script me and a friend worked on last year. But unless I can hire a whole team to make it (and it'd be longer than a couple of minutes) it isn't likely to happen.

[Dr Whooves and Assistant]

Well hey.

I'm noticing some improvement. Love the animation here as you did a great job with the movement and the tweening doesn't look all that bad. I think you did a great job with the lip syncing and the walking animation. But it could use a bit more work here and there. For example the head turning animation and when a pony moves his or hooves. Maybe you could use HotDiggedyDemon's style of animation as while he does tween his animations, his frame by frame animation is actually pretty good.

I also knew I'd recognized that sound clip as it came from something I watched on Youtube. Timing and everything is perfect.

The art work looks great. Accurate as it does look like it came from the show. Background looks pretty good and well stylized. I also like the way the contraption that Doctor Whooves tries to hold looks. It looks pretty well drawn or traced, not sure what to call it.

Overall this does look potentially good. I liked what I saw. Keep it up, man.

MikeandTreyVideo responds:

Almost all of this was done frame by frame (with the exception of the backgrounds and tardis). and the screwdriver was indeed traced and "cartoonized"

[Goldeen Loves Guitar]

This was pretty awesome.

It's been a while since I've seen anything so well animated that was based off of Pokemon. I love how authentic the voices sound, especially Pikachu's. I swear, Caxx is an amazing voice actress with loads of talent.

Your animation has also improved since Nyan Caxx as it doesn't seem like just tweens but also more Frame by Frame animation mixed in with Tweens. Similar to Leo and Satan. You also weren't too bad as Brock yourself, man.

Just a few complaints and it's that Ash's outfit is rather weird as he's wearing the season 1-5 suit while Brock wears his Hoenn outfit. Same goes for Misty (she was in a few episodes in season 7. Also Professor Oak's eyes look weird. That's all I have. Picky I know, but I like to see some accuracy in my parodies. :P

Overall, I loved this as it really looked nice in your style. You should totally keep this up, man. :)

[Acuahombre!]

A shemale Ariel with brown hair, eh?

This was pretty different to see what kind of humor appeals to the people from another country. Usually I see it on Youtube but aside from Golfinho and Peixiquato, I've never seen any other people make a flash in spanish language on Newgrounds aside from fioriparty.

Anyway, I liked the artwork, very appealing to look at and the character designs looked like nice parodies.

I think the animation looked decent, though the mouths could have been animated a bit more.

I also like your overactivity in your voice acting, too. You showed quite some enthusiasm while working on this.

[Megaman General Bubbleman]

That was cool. I liked how Megaman just had that expression for the entire course of the movie. I also like how you showed the weakness of Bubbleman through this cartoon as well.

The animation has showed some improvement here, especially in that cool intro of yours. I thought that looked nice.

I also like how you made Bubbleman sound like his voice is actually muffled because his mouth is covered by a mask.

Cute little Megaman dance, too.

Nice work, man.

[My Little Sky Craft]

This sort of thing has been done before many times and not just with these three series. Might I turn your attention to Homestuck, Pokemon, Naruto and many other things that have dived into popularity over the years?

But that really didn't bother me much like the animation did. It looked really lazy and just nothing but tweens. The mouths also looked lazily animated.

The voice acting was rather weak as the mic quality sounded terrible and the emoting wasn't much either.

Everything looked really lazy and not that appealing. You might need to work on this a bit more in the future.

[The Disney Collab]

There were a few skits I liked here.

The Pooh one, the Hades one (which had a great imitation of James Woods btw), Steamboat Willie and the Beauty and the Beast flash.

To be honest, you guys just focused on making this sick rather than funny. That's just me.

[The Dub Collab]

Alright Animation..
Okay voice acting

lame scripting.

[TOME Episode 03]

Dude, how do you get all these guest stars?!

Anyways, I'm just gonna say that I really am impressed here. I liked the shading you did in the talking sequences as they look really well done and I also like the redone pictures for the sequences as well. I also noticed that you started using more animated scenes in this episode and really nicely done, too.

I also like the way you did the backgrounds. All done with clear effects and good shading, too.

Although the Nylocke gag is starting to get old, I did happen to find the part where the Devil Guy hits his head on the sword was pretty funny as well as the "Oooooo" scene.

I'm noticing with some improvement from you. Keep working on it, dude.